10En3 – Mr Dettman – Welfare State Mini Essay

Due: Friday, 16th October

Welfare State Mini Essay

Minimum:  Introduction + 3 SEA paragraphs

INTRODUCTION (what is the welfare state?  Extension: how is it opposite to capitalism, and Mr Birling’s beliefs?)

3 SEA Paragraphs (using the quote sheet, please select the best QUOTES from the quote sheet link to help you out; the ones that relate to the welfare state. I’ve lifted a few that might help, below. http://learn.surbitonhigh.com/english/wp-content/uploads/sites/8/2014/09/Character-quotations.pdf

Mr B: 

‘mixed up together like bees in a hive’

‘community and all that nonsense’

‘a man has to mind his own business and look out for himself and his own.’

IG to Mrs B. ‘She came to you for help at a time when no woman could have needed it more.’

Sheila:

But these girls aren’t cheap labour – they’re people.’ ‘I felt rotten about it at the time and now I feel a lot worse.’ ‘She was very pretty and looked like she could take care of herself.’

VCOP Focus: Full Stops, Capital Letters and Punctuation.  Commas and regular full stops as a priority.

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2 thoughts on “10En3 – Mr Dettman – Welfare State Mini Essay

  1. Aaron

    When you read them Mr Birling is more like capitalism because he said this to sheila I think “mixed up together like bees in a hive’

    ‘community and all that nonsense’

    ‘a man has to mind his own business and look out for himself and his own.’ it meaning that he does not want anyone ales knowing about his Business people mind there own so Sheila said back is “ut these girls aren’t cheap labour – they’re people.’ ‘I felt rotten about it at the time and now I feel a lot worse.’ ‘She was very pretty and looked like she could take care of herself.’ Sheila putting her point to him saying think this because with she was in Labour she as no one there and no money to help her out when she does have a child.

    Mr Birling fried her cause of a reason why but she needed money to help her self in life and missing understanding her why she did that cause Mr Birling does not care for anyone ales only him and his family that what he only care about and his business that why Sheila said that to him

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