7En1 Letter in a bottle: paragraph 3 SRA Due Tuesday 12th May

Paragraph 3 for your letter will describe and explain what you have done since you washed up on the island. You may include:

What you did first

The other people who are with you

The jobs you have done since arriving

How you elected your leader

How difficult it has been since you arrived.

Remember you should aim to include powerful verbs- doing words that add movement (remember to dance them to see if they work) and explicit adjectives – describing words that are specific and effective (no nice, lovely, bad, horrible).

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