Year 072/073 English home learning. See planners for due dates.

Hello,

your task this week is to write a paragraph describing the atmosphere on your Islands. What are relationships like between the survivors, what is the climate like? How are people feeling? When you use a connective in your writing, underline it.

Any questions, see me.

Good luck!

Miss B

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8 thoughts on “Year 072/073 English home learning. See planners for due dates.

  1. jordangooch

    hi mrs is this good enough so far,

    We are all terribly sad, the look on our faces is, loss, sorrow, fear and a tiny bit of hope. All sorts of simple questions are racing through our mind like, will we live? do we have hope? we need help but from who? and many other devastating questions. our reaction to each other is terribly sad and it seems like we are all cold-hearted, and have drifted off into a life of complete survival. most of us are scared to seat or badly injured from the crash, our life seems as though there is nothing really left to live for.there is no chance of survival, the island is a colossal death trap we need help urgently.

    is this good enough mrs 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 :P:P 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 :P:P 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 thankyou

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    1. missgbolwell Post author

      The start of some excellent ideas Jordan. Consider changing ‘terribly sad’ as you use it twice. Always double check your use of capitals and punctuation. Very creative work so far, well done. I look forward to reading it tomorrow!

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  2. sam.h

    Hello and welcome,
    I am a good leader because, I listen to people and I respect them.
    I am also a good leader, because I am persuasive because I persuade people. I am also intelligent, which is a good thing because I can work things out. I’m a good leader, because I have a lot of courage. U can also be respectful u are also intelligent.
    Your opening is good but you need to say about the other people not just your self so then it makes them more interested because its about them not just you 
    Ok thanks

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    1. missgbolwell Post author

      Hi Lauren, well done for doing the speech. Read it out loud to one of your family members, what do they think? Can you get them to WWW and EBI it if possible?

      Hope that helps.

      Miss B

      Reply

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