7En1 Re-writing story openings Due Wednesday 25th SRA

Set on Monday (sorry, I couldn’t get on the blog!)

We are aiming to improve our fairytales so that they are the best they can be before you read/perform them for years 3 and 4. We won’t write the whole thing but will focus on adding extra detail and re-shaping structures to make them clearer and more fairytale-like.

You need to write the first three sentences of your story again, this time on your own rather than in  your group. You will keep the same characters and setting but need to be more engaging, original and descriptive.

You will bring them to next lesson to compare with other people in your group.

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