Year 9

Write a short William Golding extract that contains mystery and suspense, with simple speech surrounded by high level language. For Monday please.


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  1. Saul :)

    Saul Beck
    Text in the style of William Golding – Lord of the Flies

    The boy with fair hair walked down the last few flights of stairs. With his White Shirt in his hand exhausted from walking, the boy lay in the sun. Then out of nowhere.
    “Hi!” It said.
    The fair hair boy got up and acknowledged his surroundings. The Voice spoke again,
    “All this walking makes me so tired” The owner of the voice emerged from the undergrowth. He was shorter than the fair boy and very fat. He came forward.
    “All the adults, where are they?
    The fair head boy shrugged.
    “There aren’t any grown-ups, it’s just us”
    “No grown up?” The fat boy said surprised.
    “I guess not, haven’t seen one all day”
    “What’s your name” The fat boy asked?
    The fair head boy hesitated and spoke, “Ralph”
    The fat boy waited to be asked his name in turn, but instead the fair hair boy ralph stood up and walked away. The fat boy hurried after him, “My names Timothy by the way”


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