Write an email to Mr Hindmarsh in which you assess the new build (give the positives and negatives of your initial impression).
Remember to come up with at least three reasons for each side, and consider the appropriate tone for your Audience / Readership.
Aim at beginning each paragraph with a CONNECTIVE that reflects the direction of your writing; vary your sentence / paragraph lengths; and use a variety of punctuation.
Due: Monday 28th April
Please ensure to handwrite this, or type it up with the spellcheck turned off. (You are marked for your spelling, don’t forget.)