Mr Legowski’s 11xEN1 home learning – due Tuesday 3 December

What’s the best thing about your opening chapter so far? Share your comments below so that everyone can benefit.

Comments by Tuesday 3 December please

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8 thoughts on “Mr Legowski’s 11xEN1 home learning – due Tuesday 3 December

  1. Rhiannon

    I think that my overall plot for my story is adequate, and introducing characters in a drip feed manner. I have not revealed absolutely everything, but I have given the characters clear personalities, so that the audience has their opinions of them. Also I have briefly described the scene so that it’s easy for the reader to interpret it in any way they please.

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  2. Mary-Anne Johnson

    In my story I have given my readers clues as to what is going to happen. I do this by using the word ‘dead.’ As a single word sentence.

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  3. Olivia Kennard

    In my opening chapter, I believe that my use of punctuation was intriguing as it will lead the reader to feel more empathetic with the feelings of my character. Futhermore, I have also made my character have a sense of anonymity as no gender or name is released, however, I have used enough details and backgroud information to allow the reader to begin to connect with my protagonist.

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